May 11, 2011

In Which Mona Is Drained

April 24, 1174

"...but of course the winter has long outstayed its welcome--hard to believe that it's nearly May, isn't it? Oh well, at least it gives me an excuse to wear that lovely crispinette your father gave me for my birthday. Speaking of which, perhaps you'd like a similar one for a wedding gift, Elhina? I know we haven't set a date yet, but it's bound to be sooner rather than later, so..."

Their mother seemed so enraptured with her own voice that she didn't even detect Elhina's exasperated sigh. Not that Mona found that too surprising. Mona was at the age when girls started to realize that their mothers weren't perfect--and with her mother, that epiphany had hit years ago. She almost wished it was her own theoretical wedding they were talking about, if only because it would mean she could get the hell out of this castle a little sooner.

Alas, she was only nine. But at least that gave her time to figure out some way out of here without having to get married? Maybe something involving pirates...

"Oh, but it simply couldn't be anything like mine, of course! Mind you, the homage would be flattering, but I do have to stay one step ahead of--"

Whatever it was her mother had to stay one step ahead of, Mona never heard. The knock at the door was a welcome interruption. "Your majesty? Your son is here to see you."

Her mother's face scrunched into an annoyed pout. There was nothing she hated more than being interrupted. "Which one? I have three sons."

"Five," Elhina corrected under her breath. Mona didn't know whether or not to acknowledge that she'd heard her.

But apparently, her mother did. "Yes, five. Three, and then two. Anyway, which is it?"

"Young Ietrin, your highness."

"Oh, of course!" sighed Mona's mother as if it had been obvious--though really, Ietrin would have been the least likely option the way Mona saw it. Not that she and her mother ever saw things the same way. "Well? Send him in."

Eblor's footsteps could be heard making their way down the corridor, soon replaced by another set heading in the other direction. Mona watched with relief as her brother stepped into the room, shattering whatever remained of their mother's insufferably girly oasis. "Sisters."

"Ietrin."

Mona barely knew her two older brothers, but the differences between them were apparent even in her limited scope. While Searle must have been the spitting image of his late father, Mona suspected that Ietrin was exactly what their mother would have looked like had she been a man. Where Searle was stone-cold and glaring, Ietrin was inviting and never without that shy smile Mona wouldn't have thought fitting for her mother's lips. But the most striking perpendicular was how they acted around their mother. She could have taken the whole world in her hands and laid it at Searle's feet, and he would have shoved it aside. Ietrin would have settled for the smallest house in the tiniest village in the poorest country if it meant a second of her time, a fraction of her heart."Mother."

"Darling." Mona's mother rose with the grace of an empress and the contentment of a caged animal. "I trust your journey was well."

Ietrin swallowed. "Well enough."

Nodding, their mother locked her hands together and flexed them outward, the gold of her wedding band as bright and flawless as the day Mona's father had placed it on her finger. Mona wasn't sure if Ietrin could stomach the sight, but it didn't matter. He wasn't looking. "What brings you to Naroni?"

For a moment, all was silent. Ietrin opened his mouth, but no sound burst forth. He tried again a few seconds later, but was no more successful. A third time... a fourth...

The fifth time was something different entirely.

"Mama, you have to c-come home!"

Mona felt the blood drain from her face, a faint spell coming over her in spite of the fact that she'd never been prone to such things. She'd never seen a man cry, and she'd certainly never seen her mother move to comfort anyone. "Mother...?"

"Please!" Ietrin buried his face in his hands and wailed. "We have to leave t-tomorrow! You have t-to come with m-me..."

Her eyes a strange mix of compassion and surprise, Mona's mother bit her lip. "Darling..."

"Please." The world might have ended right there and it wouldn't have mattered as far as the two of them were concerned. Choking back another sob, Ietrin wiped his eyes with his sleeve. "It's Searle..."

NEXT CHAPTER:

20 comments:

Van said...

Err, sorry for not posting anything anywhere yesterday. Long story short, two very improbable events somehow happened within twenty-four hours of each other and by the end of the day I was just too tired to do much.

Meanwhile, sorry about the lack of quality with this post. I have no excuse other than sheer laziness here.

Anonymous said...

Hope today goes better for you than yesterday did, Van. :)

And aww! I never thought I'd say this, but ... poor Ietrin! (Seriously though, why couldn't Jeda have married this Ietrin! He seems like a sweetie pie. ;)) And of course poor Searle, but between one Searle and another I say that all the time. Poor Ren and baby Karlspan, too. This wouldn't happen to be a case where a not-so-naked Tavrin could help, would it? Or even a naked one! Searle can barely see, Ren won't mind, and Laralita would probably be completely schocked and scandalized, so it's all good.

And speaking of Laralita, she had darn well better go home! This is her last chance to make some kind of peace with Searle, even if the fact that peace needs to be made hasn't quite penetrated the fluff between her ears yet.

How did she and Roderick produce Mona -- she seems like a feisty kid! I like her!

Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to go squee over baby CELINA(!!). Her name ought to be the next Riona as far as Naroni popularity is concerned.

*checks bio pages*

There are TWO baby Celinas!! *squees some more*

Van said...

Thanks Morgaine :)

Jeda didn't marry this Ietrin because when Geneva and Medea made their deal, he wasn't born yet ;) But yes, he is a nice guy (very nice, probably, if he can forgive Laralita for abandoning him and Searle). He's engaged to Lettie's triplet sister.

Tavrin and Laralita in the same post? I'd almost want to save that for a more humorous occasion. Almost ;)

Mona is kind of a lightning strike as far as Roderick and Laralita's offspring are concerned. But I guess the genes are coming from somewhere. Neither of Roderick's siblings are anything like him, and most of Laralita's aren't like her either. Mona must've just gotten a good dose of Oswald/Holladrin/Alina/Ovrean/etc.

Two baby Celinas :) I should probably grow them both up next time I'm in-game. I'm going to guess that Severin and Nora's Celina looks a lot like her brother Roddie. As for Lorn and Leara's Celina, I have no idea.

Chene303 said...

*runs to check family tree* OHH! Makes ALOT more sense now. That thing is a life saver, I honestly forgot how Searle was related to everyone and I also forgot that this Ietran existed! Oops...
I find it amazing that Rodrick and Laralita could have children that can...well, think... I like that Mona kid! Are we gonna see more of her??
So Searle's dead??? Like dead, dead?? :(

Van said...

Heheh... considering the number of characters in this story and the number of repeat names, the family tree is crucial :)

I'm liking Mona too, even if this post wasn't about her. I do have plans for her when she's a little older, but I'm guessing her storyline won't be featured until '78/'79ish.

According to the family trees, the character profiles, and the "Most Recent Events" widget in the sidebar, Searle is still alive as far as anyone knows...

Chene303 said...

Oh, I usually don't check any of that stuff unless I'm really confused and considering what a small part Searle has played I couldn't be bothered to put effort into checking if he was alive.

I meant to put 'So IS Searle dead?? Like dead,dead??' (As opposed to almost dead but not quite yet.)

Van said...

No worries. I did consider that the ending of this post might come off as somewhat ambiguous.

But no, Searle was still alive when Ietrin set out. As far as anyone in Naroni knows, that hasn't changed.

Penelope said...

I don't suppose it would be such an emergency if Searle was already dead. :o

But I thought I commented like, yesterday.

Laralita puzzles me. I don't know how she could be so wrapped up in herself that her own children would matter so little to her.

Van said...

True XD

No worries. It's not like I expect everyone to comment on every post :P

Laralita is... bizarrely, freakishly selfish. She loves her kids in a way, but clearly that way doesn't involve paying them much attention when it doesn't benefit her :S

S.B. said...

my god Laralita is a loon. Three and then two makes five. Um...yeah. And there is poor Ietrin with his heart breaking and he's coming to her for help? He may as well take a portrait of her back with him and make a sock puppet out of it. Does he really think she'd be anything but awful even if she did come?

I'd turn to something with pirates to get out of that place too!

Van said...

She definitely needs to sort out her priorities :S

Ietrin's just trying to help, but it does seem like a gamble. Also, would Searle even want to see Laralita one last time? Probably only if it means he can call her a bitch to her face before he dies.

Pirates > Roderick + Laralita

Van said...

NOTE: The following eight comments were devoured in the Great Blogger Fuckfest of '11. I have no idea if they'll ever be back, but for now, here are some pastes from my inbox. If the real comments come back, these (and this) will be deleted.

Van said...

Posted by Chene303 to The Kingdom of Naroni at 12:04 PM, May 11, 2011

*runs to check family tree* OHH! Makes ALOT more sense now. That thing is a life saver, I honestly forgot how Searle was related to everyone and I also forgot that this Ietran existed! Oops...
I find it amazing that Rodrick and Laralita could have children that can...well, think... I like that Mona kid! Are we gonna see more of her??
So Searle's dead??? Like dead, dead?? :(

Van said...

Posted by Dinuriel to The Kingdom of Naroni at 12:11 PM, May 11, 2011

Heheh... considering the number of characters in this story and the number of repeat names, the family tree is crucial :)

I'm liking Mona too, even if this post wasn't about her. I do have plans for her when she's a little older, but I'm guessing her storyline won't be featured until '78/'79ish.

According to the family trees, the character profiles, and the "Most Recent Events" widget in the sidebar, Searle is still alive as far as anyone knows...

Van said...

Posted by Chene303 to The Kingdom of Naroni at 1:25 PM, May 11, 2011

Oh, I usually don't check any of that stuff unless I'm really confused and considering what a small part Searle has played I couldn't be bothered to put effort into checking if he was alive.

I meant to put 'So IS Searle dead?? Like dead,dead??' (As opposed to almost dead but not quite yet.)

Van said...

Posted by Dinuriel to The Kingdom of Naroni at 4:26 PM, May 11, 2011

No worries. I did consider that the ending of this post might come off as somewhat ambiguous.

But no, Searle was still alive when Ietrin set out. As far as anyone in Naroni knows, that hasn't changed.

Van said...

Posted by Penelope to The Kingdom of Naroni at 8:45 AM, May 12, 2011

I don't suppose it would be such an emergency if Searle was already dead. :o

But I thought I commented like, yesterday.

Laralita puzzles me. I don't know how she could be so wrapped up in herself that her own children would matter so little to her.

Van said...

Posted by Dinuriel to The Kingdom of Naroni at 8:59 AM, May 12, 2011

True XD

No worries. It's not like I expect everyone to comment on every post :P

Laralita is... bizarrely, freakishly selfish. She loves her kids in a way, but clearly that way doesn't involve paying them much attention when it doesn't benefit her :S

Van said...

Posted by S.B. to The Kingdom of Naroni at 9:54 AM, May 12, 2011

my god Laralita is a loon. Three and then two makes five. Um...yeah. And there is poor Ietrin with his heart breaking and he's coming to her for help? He may as well take a portrait of her back with him and make a sock puppet out of it. Does he really think she'd be anything but awful even if she did come?

I'd turn to something with pirates to get out of that place too!

Van said...

Posted by Dinuriel to The Kingdom of Naroni at 10:10 AM, May 12, 2011

She definitely needs to sort out her priorities :S

Ietrin's just trying to help, but it does seem like a gamble. Also, would Searle even want to see Laralita one last time? Probably only if it means he can call her a bitch to her face before he dies.

Pirates > Roderick + Laralita