December 7, 2012

In Which Elarys Plays Along

July 27, 1180

Elarys hadn't seen the young man since he'd been scarcely more than a boy. That said, she knew damn well who he was, why he was here. Something had gone wrong.

And Ietrin must have known she'd know it, otherwise he wouldn't have entered her study with that sluggish, fearful tread, metaphorical tail between his legs, all in spite of the weeks-long journey it would have taken him to get here. But while some--her daughter came to mind--might have gotten straight to the point, such bluntness was not Elarys's style. And oh, it had been far too long since she'd had such a chance to toy with a young man. "And here I was, thinking I was far too old to be expecting calls from princes."

He blinked, stunned--caught off guard by the playful opening, as many were. As she preferred it. "I never would have guessed that from looking at you, my lady."

The response was mumbled and hesitant. That didn't matter. "Good to hear it from a handsome young thing like you. But I suppose I can't delude myself into thinking you rode all this way just to flatter me?"

"Perhaps not, though it has been a while since I've had the opportunity to flatter a woman." Or taken the opportunity, more like--but there was little point in pretending to care about that.

Besides, it did give a most convenient opening. "I did hear through the grapevine that things haven't been all wine and roses between you and my daughter as of late. Something about my grandson?"

"Yes, Kaldar." There was a slight note of fondness in his voice, which in itself was unsurprising--the man only had the one son, after all--but that old adolescent tic in her brow would have been having a fit had she spent all those years mastering her composure. Elarys had no use for feelings. They served only to complicate unnecessarily. "Somehow, Ellona's gotten it into her pretty little head that his becoming king after me couldn't possibly be to his benefit, and she hasn't consented to seeing me since. She won't let me see Kaldar and Ella either, unless I pull rank and demand it--and even then, only if Neilor's there to supervise."

"Well, Ellona was always a little... odd." But not that odd, surely? What woman in her right mind would pass up the power that came with having a king for a son? Or a grandson, as was the case with Elarys herself. Frankly, it almost seemed that Ellona had gone out of her way to spite her.

That was fine. If Ellona wanted to make an enemy out of Elarys, then who was she not to play along? "You, good sir, are the Crown Prince of Naroni. Surely you're familiar with Dovian law?"

Ietrin nodded, though not without swallowing first. Of course he was the sort of prince who dozed off during those dull-yet-important lessons. But that would work. He didn't need to know anything. It may have been better if he didn't.

"So am I. My father was a magistrate, did you know?" The prince shook his head. "A clever one, too. He had a particular affinity for those obscure little laws that rarely come into play."

The young man's face lit with understanding. Perhaps she had been wrong in assuming him to be stupid, but it made little difference. He didn't have to be stupid, as long as he was simply stupid enough. "So you're aware of one that might help."

Wrong--one that would help. "You made the right choice, coming to me."

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6 comments:

Van said...

It's been ten Naroni years since we last saw Elarys. I had intended to bring her back sooner, but things kept getting in the way and I ended up making a few tweaks to the planned storyline that required certain delays.

In other news, I hate migraines.

Winter said...

Ietrin, you're like one of those riddles that answers itself. This is why you can't see your children, because you're this guy.

I have to think that Roderick would have an objection to Kaldar leapfrogging his younger sons. And somehow, an illegitimate prince seems like it would be a big reminder that Ietrin is half-Geneva (and that Geneva existed in the first place.)

I hope your head feels better!

Van said...

Prince Ietrin, a living demonstration of circular logic since 1154. XD

Oh, Roderick would definitely object to Kaldar budging his other sons! In fact, that's probably in part why Ietrin needs Elarys's help to intervene; Roderick may be a lousy king, but he is still a king, and if he didn't have any objections to Ietrin's plans with his not-so-secret other children, he'd have no qualms about going over Ellona's head. As things stand now, Ellona is refusing to confirm her children's paternity and therefore there is no official proof that they're even Ietrin's, so Roderick's not going to lift a finger even for visitation rights, never mind the line of succession.

Thanks! It feels better now (and it mostly did when I whipped up this chapter), though it did sadly take pretty much any productivity out of my late afternoon/early evening.

Joseph said...

Holy hell. If this law is anything like I think it is then Ellona is going to be mightily pissed. I mean, she'll probably be pissed anyway just... more so.

Anonymous said...

Yeah, I do not want to be anywhere near Ellona when she finds out about this ... she'll probably go berserk (and I don't blame her), given that I imagine Ietrin is trying to figure out some way to take her kids away from her. Not cool, Ietrin!

I wonder if she could get Roderick on her side in some way? Like Winter pointed out, he would want his own sons to inherit after Ietrin, not Ietrin's bastard son. And what about Octavius? He's not the king, and he has no reason to help Ellona, but he has every reason to spit in Ietrin's eye. Repeatedly.

And for that matter, we've got Severin the Crusader for People's Rights ... even Lorn might be persuaded to move against Ietrin if it was put to him in the right way ...

There might be some hope here. *fingers crossed*

Van said...

Joseph: Oh, Ellona will definitely be pissed, no matter what, and not without good reason. :S

Morgaine: That is the sort of thing Ietrin would do, sadly. I wouldn't blame Ellona for going berserk either...

What she does have going for her is that Roderick agrees with her, whether he sees himself as agreeing with her or not. As long as Roderick's alive, no one's tampering with his precious line of succession. Bingo about Octavius and Severin too. Lorn... well, Lorn could probably be persuaded to Ellona's cause on behalf of Leara's precious nieces (she's Kaldar's aunt too, but she's never met him and doesn't care to; for all Leara turned out mostly all right, a certain amount of Roderick's snobbery was bound to survive the Geneva genes).

In any case, if it comes down to it, Ellona won't be without allies.