July 13, 1157

"No," argued Raia, promptly pulling one back. "This donkey--that horsie. Stupid!"

He wished he could have left her at home with Alina and Jadin, but the truth was, he needed a pretense... and what better pretense than a play date? It was an awful feeling, using his own daughter like this, but his last visit with Celina had told him all he needed to know; something had to be done.

"At least we know that each of them understands half of what a mule is," insisted Severin.
"Indeed. If we could combine their minds, then we may have the most intelligent two-year-old the world has ever seen."
Nodding, Severin carefully stepped over the ark and made his way to Dalston's side, then faced the duke with an incredible grimace.

"Quite well, thank you very much. She's an exceedingly mild-mannered baby," answered Dalston fondly. "Have you see her yet?"
"Indeed, I have."

"I think it can only be a good thing to have one of each," Severin agreed, wondering how much more of this would be necessary before he could deal with his true business in coming here. "Mind you, it won't be long before I have two of one kind."
"Or perhaps you shall have one of a third kind."
"If that be the case, then I suppose I can claim a full set."
Dalston laughed. "There is not much that you find unusual or unacceptable, is there?"

Dalston raised an eyebrow. "Oh? Then why are you here, Severin?"
Severin sighed. "Dalston, I'm sorry that your son is here to witness this."


Severin rolled his eyes. "You know perfectly well what that was for."
"Severin, I already apologized to Celina--"


Where else had Severin heard that before? Oh yes--he'd been ten years old and his father had been complaining to him about a fight he'd had with Viridis. If he'd been in this situation before, then why not deal with it the same way? He would tell Dalston exactly what he had told his father all those years ago.

"But I do love her!" declared Dalston in exasperation. "And I tell her I do! Why does she think I don't?"
Severin shrugged. "The female mind is a thing far too complex for the likes of you and I, but I would suggest some sort of gesture--one considerably greater than an apology. And while you're at it, maybe tell Geneva to stay away from here; I know she's been visiting."


"Don't you dare liken my mother to that whore," he hissed after a stunned moment. Oh, but what if it was true? Was his mother really any better than Geneva? They had both stolen a man away from his wife, and that fact could not be argued; but at least his mother had not had her own husband, and his father had been unfaithful to Viridis before...
"I'm sorry," muttered Dalston meekly. "I didn't mean it. I just... just..."

8 comments:
Unfortunately, there's still the problem of Geneva's pregnancy... but that will be wrapped up before the end of the Naroni year.
Dalston's pretty emotional right now. I think Severin's mainly campaigning for the rebuilding of that relationship for Celina's sake. They grew up together, so they're pretty tight.
Blah!! I don't feel sorry for Dalston at ALL! He deserved that slap and SO much more!! Wimp!!
Go Severin! You're the man!! I wasn't NOT expecting that slap! Hahaha!!! And the prefaced apology? Awesome!! Pure Awesome!!
God, is Geneva really so callous that she'd continue to toss that in Celina's face and come around to visit? WOW!! O_o
He really did deserve that slap. If only Celina had been the one to give it to him...
Geneva's not really so much trying to rub everything in Celina face as genuinely having difficulty understand why Celina (and everyone else) doesn't share her needs and feelings in regards to all things sexual. But really, since she's at the point where someone as liberal as Severin is calling her a whore, obviously she's gone too far.
Ugh, Dalston is such a little boy! "Well, I said I was sorry ..." -- one word doesn't do anything to remedy a situation! And yet, you really channeled what most guys are like when it comes to them messing things up, lol.
Most guys are terrible for that, aren't they? Silly creatures.
Oh well, at least some of them are sexy.
I absolutely LOVE Severin and hahaha he's playing mender to the broken marriage. All your characters are either lovable or loathable... Ok on to the next few chapters, Almost done, LOL!
Sometimes I think I might have done my characters wrong that way. Sometimes they strike me as a little one-dimensional, but I've been making an effort to work on that lately. Except not with all of them--like, I wouldn't even try to give Norwan a redeeming quality. That would just totally break his character.
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